Chinese Lore- a selection of mythical fauna (16)

Song Si

Physical Description:

Like a female pheasant with a human head.

Special Properties:

It jumps around whenever humans are nearby The sound of its call is like its own name.


Tian Ma

Physical Description:

Looks like a white dog with a black head.

Special Properties:

It flies away whenever humans are nearby The sound of its call is like its own name.


Jiang Wei

Physical Description:

A crow-like bird with a patterned head, white beak and red feet.

Special Properties:

The sound of its call is like its own name.

Lore:

The youngest daughter of Yan Di (the one who had a daughter that turned into the Yao Grass) drowned at the Eastern Ocean and her spirit turned into the Jiang Wei which always dropped sticks and stones into the ocean hoping to one day destroy it.


Long Snake

Physical Description:

A snake whose hair is as hard as that on the neck of pigs (or hogs, not sure, but this is supposed to hair that are hard).

Special Properties:

The sound it makes is like the sound of a wood block, a small slit drum made from a single piece of wood and used as a percussion instrument, being played.

Moonlake’s Writing Updates- December 2023

This year, I’m approaching the work slightly differently. Instead of always cycling in between my two protagonists, I’ve given my female protagonist two consecutive goes. I’m happy to report that this does let me drill down further into her scenes but progress is still slow overall. 

At the time of writing and your reading this, I’m just switching over to my male protagonist and going through what I had written. 

Now, as for the WIP overall, I think Act 1 is pretty much down pat. But Act 2 and 3 is not quite all there yet. Basically, when I outlined the story (yes, I took two years but back then I only started with the UBC writing a novel courses and I didn’t quite know the three act structure) I think I made Act 2 and 3 too short and I’ve now come to realise that I just don’t have enough content for them so for the last two years at least most of the work have gone into putting more content into these two parts of the story and filling in gaps. And it isn’t easy, especially in Act 3 when I feel like sometimes I just don’t know scenes well enough and so I left heaps of placeholders and I really have no idea what happens in between one chapter to the next. Basically, it’s back to asking myself lots of questions and jotting down ideas. 

That’s all for this year. I will continue to plow on. 

This is for… shake the dust…

The line comes from Shake the Dust by Anis Mojgani. I usually like more flowery prose but the line has got some gritty attitude to it that makes it beautiful in some way to me. 

This is for the butterflies waiting to emerge from their cocoons, for those likewise trapped in stasis, for those who might not even know they want something else or could get there… shake the dust. 

This is for the teardrops that have yet to fall, the drops of colour that are yet to wilt or shrivel or dry up, the miasma of sins and decadence… shake the dust. 

This is for wandering whims in reading, for the hole or whatever else that current whim fills, for unknown and totally inexplicable food cravings… shake the dust. 

This is for previous beauty pageants who have grown old, for warriors aged beyond the battlefield, for meetings too late or too early… shake the dust. 

This is for lullabies you don’t remember, memories too early for recall, instincts too basic for suppression… shake the dust. 

Reading Highlights of 2023

I’ve had a particularly fruitful reading year this year, more than doubling my reading goals on Goodreads. Which is to say that I’ve already read more than 40 books this year. 

So I’ve never done such a post before but I thought I would do one this year, not sure if I want this to be a recurring post or not. We will see. 

So without further ado, below are the books which have earned a spot in this post including: 

Most Memorable Book of 2023

Madukka the River Serpent by Julie Janson: This aboriginal thriller has opened my eyes to some issues current to Australia that I didn’t know existed. I’m not normally interested in current affairs but this book does it so well and merges them seamlessly into a thriller that it definitely leaves me a taste for more. And it’s the first work of its genre by this Aboriginal author so good work. 

Favourite Series of 2023

The Last Kingdom series by Bernard Cornwell: I’ve only read up to the first three books of this historical fiction series but there is always the option to take up more books to track Uhtred’s journey in life. I do enjoy the first three books enough to have thought about doing it. I haven’t actually done it this year because as a fantasy reader, a natural stopping point for me is a trilogy. We will see what unfolds in 2024. 

Favourite Sleuth of 2023

This is a hard one actually. But going through my Goodreads account, I decided to give it to Mick Haller from the Lincoln Lawyer by Michael Connelly. Why? Because I think his mystery is top-notch and I went on a spree sampling all of his protagonists. I like them all but Mick Haller is the one that stood out for me. 

And that’s all for this year’s Honours. 

Adventures Aboard the Chen Xing- Chapter 29

Aurora adjusted the scanner to filter out background ambiance and the grav sled’s energy signature, smiling at the results. “There we go!”

“You point, we drive.” Estella told her, waiting for a direction. 

I kept my eye on plant creatures that blocked our paths while we went in a more or less straight line back to the huge derelict with the LED lights. Needless to say, between Estella’s blades and the machine gun, green goo was everywhere along our path. I estimated we had thinned the ranks of the plant to about a quarter of their original size. 

“This is the last place I was hoping we’d wind up.” Aurora said. 

Guppy looked anxious. She was quiet as she stared at the vine-covered side of the structure. 

“We need to clean out the vines somehow, weedkiller maybe? Fire could damage the structure.” Aurora said. 

What about overloading the power grid that powers the lights?” Estella suggested, “If it blows the glass and the electricity should fry lots of them.”

Jessica looked at a few of them. “They look like they’re already dead to me. And…” she looked closer, moved a few around, “Not sure if this matters but this isn’t the same species.”

“Really?” Estellas walked over to examine them herself, “We may be able to just head on in once we clean out the remaining plants out here.”

I shrugged and patted my gun. “Up to you guys.”

“It should be safe.” Estella concluded. 

“Let’s go then, no point driving around hunting for another way, it’ll just give the plants more time to regroup, or that giant thing to find us.” Aurora wrapped up. 

Guppy still looked nervous, kept switching her gaze between Estella and Jessica and the plants. 

“What’s the matter, Guppy? Rare for you to get that face.” I prodded her. 

That immediately aroused Aurora’s maternal instincts, “You okay?”

“It’s just… are they all dead? Is it safe? I mean, I’m tough and all that, but… umm, they did drag me off that one time…” Guppy actually blushed and then looked around and grinned. “Nevermind. Let’s go gut whatever’s in this place…” She pushed her way inside, but came back out after a second. “Oh, wait, were you going to burn the lights first?”

“Nah, if it’s not a threat no reason to kill our only light source.” Aurora said. She stuck close to Guppy as both of them headed inside. I followed close on their heels. 

Aurora held out her scanner as she walked in the lead. “Looks like it’s downward, there should be a maintenance corridor the line runs down, let’s see if we can find an entrance around here somewhere?”

My eyes and Estella’s pen light fell onto a door at the same time. It was rusted and bent so it didn’t open easily. It had a good camouflage in that it looked like part of a piece of equipment. When we bent closer, we saw that it was hinged in an odd way. When we wrested it open, it revealed a narrow drop with rungs embedded along one side of the vertical tunnel. “Oooh, this reminds me of home.” Guppy said. 

“Nice find,” Aurora passed Guppy a Glow bug tube, “Let’s get down there and see where it leads.”

“Guppy, you go in the middle, we don’t want you disappearing on us.” I told her. She took the tube and was halfway through the opening before I could even blink. An echo-y “sorry” came back up but she apparently kept going. I descended after her. I could see a bobbing light quickly disappearing down the tunnel and then I couldn’t see it anymore. I hurried in that direction, hoping that I would catch up again.

Eventually, the tunnel winded down to a floor with another horizontal tunnel splitting off. It was too short to walk in. I would have to crawl to get in. “Not this again.” but I went in. I saw the glow light ahead briefly before it disappeared again. Then a scream sounded. I crawled ahead as quickly as I could. 

An open space lay at the end of the tunnel. Half of Guppy was stuck into an open panel. 

“What’s wrong?” Aurora’s yell came from behind. That scream was loud enough. 

Some commotion around Guppy’s back half, as if she was trying to pull back through. I rushed forward to help her with that. There was very little leverage because of the tight space. I got into a tug-of-war with something on the other side while muffled cries came from Guppy, but it was a stand-off. Aurora had come up, she had a machete in her hand and she shifted around looking for an angle to cut at something. 

“Use your knife!” Aurora shouted, grabbing onto Guppy’s belt around her waist and pulling. Between the two of us, we pulled Guppy back through. There was a vine wrapped around her waist. Aurora chopped that away with her machete. Another vine came loose from Guppy’s mouth and she screamed loudly again. Then she said, “There are a lot of them up there!”

“I should of stocked up on weedkiller, ah well. Is this the only way forward?” Estella said. 

Jessica pointed at the piece of vine that just dropped down from Guppy. “That’s another one of those different species”

“I told you not to run off and now you’ve paid for it.” I admonished the kiddo. She nodded, looking freaked out. 

“Sam’s right, stick close to us from now on, she might not get there in time to save you next time.” Aurora told her. 

“There’s like a hundred of them up there!” Guppy informed us. 

Aurora seemed to be looking around for an alternative path, “Too many to fight our way through.”

“This species might be the one my blood made docile.” Having said that, Estella pricked her finger with the point of her knife and dripped some blood onto the tendrils. The blood soaked in but otherwise nothing happened. 

“Not just the plants up there, but a lot of computers and stuff too.” Guppy told us. 

“That sounds like our control room,” Aurora looked over at us, “I could break loose a live wire, and try to use it to electrocute them, but there’s a good chance I’d trash the machines up there in the process. If anyone has a better idea, now’s the time?”

“Plants hate cold, like back on the ship, if we could cool the room down they’d maybe retreat, or get sluggish enough we could kill them all off.” Estella looked over at Guppy. “I just had a thought, do you happen to have any of that red goo on you in a jar or anything? From when you went playing in it?”

Guppy passed her a sly look,  nodded and pulled out a small tube. “I like to look at it sometimes.”

“Good girl!” Estella beamed at her. “This might mutate the plants, it’s the same color as the ones my blood changed.” She dripped a little on the same vine she bled on. The goo soaked into the vine and it swelled up, wriggling around for a moment as if it had come back to life. 

“That looks like a reaction to me.” Estella grinned, soaking a cloth in some of the goo. “Pass me your machete, Aurora, I’ll put this on the end and stick it down the hole, hopefully the vines will grab it and it’ll mess them up.” She did what she said. “This stuff seems to be some kind of repell-” She paused. “Uh, I think we just found the crew of this station, the plants.”

“Wait, you mean we’ve been attacking the crew?” Aurora paused at the notion. “I mean Vines is helping rebuild the ship, so they’re not all hostile, but the ones in the torpedoes messed up the pirates pretty awful.”

“Think of those ones as newly birthed children, they don’t have the maturity of adults, they react out of instinct, they know only that they need and are hungry.” Estella said. 

“This is getting complicated.” I scratched my head.

“We need to try to communicate with them somehow then, because they might not be the native owners, but their pets or something.” Aurora said. 

“Uh, I think that red goo might make that a moot concern.” Estella replied. 

Aurora nodded, “Any objections to continuing our original plan? All else aside if Star Analytics gets their mitts on this they’ll use it to cause untold harm everywhere.”

“The plants may also just be mimicking the behavior of the people they killed and took over.” Estella pointed out.

As if to punctuate what Estella said before, two of the other plants moved up to the affected one and touched it. The red spread to them. “Yeah, that red goo I think is going to clear out the plants for us.”

“That’s a plus, I think,” Aurora shook her head. “If the plants were intelligent they’d of shut down the elevator after we left, or otherwise done something to make it harder for us to get back in here, they seem too primitive to have built this place.”

As we talked, the red infection among plants continued. “They’re popping with red spots, but that’s it.” Estella said. 

“Congrats, you made them pregnant.” Aurora joked. Guppy looked down at her empty goo container and then looked at the plants. “All of that from this?”

Estella shrugged, giggling. “I mean, possibly?” She crawled up the shaft before any of us could stop her. And they said I was the impulsive one. 

“It’s safe girls.” She called back. Guppy crawled out and stood close to Estella. I didn’t even see her going back in. The kiddo reached out and poked at one of the red spots on a plant. 

“I guess that takes care of it for now.” Aurora urged Jessica forward. “After you hon.”

Jessica pulled herself through. “It’s so fascinating.” She said from the other side. 

I walked up besides Estella. ‘Now what?” I looked back across to Aurora. 

It was Estella who answered me. “Now we see if Aurora can find the engines on this rock, or the self destruct button and get out of here before something bad happens?” She eyed the plants warily. 

“Right.” The three of us headed in.Aurora went to the closest computer and fiddled with it. “Just like the elevator, I should be able to sort this out. Hmm.” A slot in which a cylinder would fit opened up after she tried a few buttons on the keyboard. She pulled out the device Vines passed her, and it fit like a charm. “Bingo!” She grinned, “Okay, when this goes in, all hell might break loose so get ready to run.”

Estella pulled off the safety on her shotgun, standing next to the exit. “I’ll bring up the rear.”

The cartridge thudded home. A low hum appeared, several of the stations lighted up with a lot of activity. 

“I think that turned the place on, now let’s see if it can fly.” Aurora headed over to the other consoles and started looking them over for flight controls and weapons.

A panel slid open on a wall, revealing a viewscreen. It came to life. Vines was standing there. 

Aurora gave him a welcoming wave and smile. “Hey there!” He waved back. 

Estella relaxed slightly. “Hey, is Hue there too?”

Some vines part and H square’d face appeared. “What? How did you know there would be a screen here?” I asked. 

Some of the plants turned to face the screen. 

“We were hoping you could tell us how to fly this thing?” Aurora was asking them. Jessica was just looking back and forth between the various plants. “Umm, see how they are gesturing. It almost looks like they’re having a conversation. Except I don’t hear anything.”

“Looks like the vines got a connection to the Xing after all.. Hmmm…” I let the thought trail off. 

“They must be speaking in a frequency outside our hearing range.” Estella nodded.. “Some plants, like mandrakes, let out a high pitched scream when injured.”

“We need oil.” Aurora said, “A drop of oil in a rag placed in one ear, it will lower the frequency of sound traveling through it, let you hear what’s out of range otherwise.”

“Really?” Estella looked at Aurora, seemingly puzzled. 

Jessica looked thought. “Assuming it’s sound they’re using.” She said. 

“Like how stuff sounds different underwater, same principle, just different execution. Well, it won’t cause any harm to try at least.” Aurora looked over at me. “Do you have some gun oil or anything in your pack?”

“I’m thinking, with plants, maybe it’s something else. Scent? Something visual?” Apparently Jessica’s thoughts were not finished. 

“They might be communicating by spores too.” Estella contributed her extensive knowledge on gardening. 

“What could we lose?” I shrugged and fished out some gun oil from my backpack.

Aurora dripped a piece of rag into the oil and stuck it in her left ear to listen. “I can maybe build a machine to translate spore into speech, but that’ll take a long while.”

“Let’s just ask Hue for guidance, he seems to have figured a way to communicate with Vines.” Estella suggested. 

“Yeah, oil is a no go.” Aurora shrugged. 

As if acting on cue, H squared’s face popped up on the screen again. 

“Hue, we need to know how to make this asteroid fly through space, where’s the controls?” Aurora asked him. 

“What about ultraviolet? Instead of ultrasonic? Plants use that to direct bees. At least some of the normal ones do.” Jessica suggested. 

H squared nodded, mumbled a little, pulled out some paper and drew a diagram of some controls with arrows showing how to direct things. 

“That’s easier to rig up a machine for,” Aurora traced her eyes from the diagram to the control panels and began pushing buttons. “I also need weapons controls, Hue, so I can blow up nearby asteroids so we can fly out of here safely.”

More drawing and then H squared showed me a weapons diagram. 

“So we’re not blowing the place up then?” Estella sighed in relief. “I was not looking forward to trying to outrun that blast.”

This works, we can fly this out to the rim and park it in a stable orbit around some other sun, give them a new life far from colonized space.” Aurora said. 

“How about I help you design a translator, Aurora. I’m sure Estella can manage the controls.” Jessica volunteered. 

“Great idea.” Aurora stepped back, “Flying is more your thing anyway, I’m better with the engineering.”

Over in a corner by herself, Guppy was actually playing toss with a few of the plants. Or  they were tossing her from one to the other into vines-turned netting.  She giggled while telling them to throw her higher. I did not say anything, this was safe as far as I was concerned. 

“I was just about to ask if you wanted me to take over.” Estella stepped forward and touched the controls lightly. “This is going to be like flying a bathtub full of molten lava down a luge course.” She muttered.

“Given the number of perverse comparisons you could of made, that’s nicely tame.” Aurora told her while smiling at Jessica, “Okay, let’s see, I’ll need some lights from over there,” She pointed, “And one of those speakers from there, and the access panel from that machine as a backing. “If this works it’ll translate their light rays into speech, and our speech into light rays. I just need a camera, one from one of the view screens should work perfectly.”

“This is… I never thought I will be flying off into space with a whole asteroid.” My voice shook with excitement.

“This is the coolest thing ever.” Estella said. 

As we talked, colorful patterns lit up over the plants’ bodies on a camera. “Yeah, this is perfect!” Aurora hugged Jessica happily. “Thanks for the idea and your help!”

Jessica blushed. “I, uh… I’m happy to help.”

“You two make a cute couple,” Estella told Aurora and Jessica with a grin, which made Jessica blush even more.

I started to explore the weapons. There’s some very giant cannon at my beck and call and a few missile bays. 

Aurora smiled and said, “Uh, thanks, I think?”

Guppy was breathlessly excited when she came over. “So, Sam, you gonna blow up an asteroid? Can I watch?”

“Well, the weapons are pretty cool. As for blowing things up, we will find something sooner or later. Don’t you worry about that.” I grinned. 

“I meant it, you look nice together. Now hang on while I see if the engines still work.” Estella adjusted the speed to go slower so that it did not feel as bumpy. “Give me a sec to turn on the shields so the debris doesn’t damage us.” 

It took more than one but “Shields up!”

“You helped me build this hon, you get the honors of turning it on.” Aurora told Jessica.

Jessica smiled shyly then did so. 

“There should be a scanner around here somewhere to tell us if that one is safe to blast,” Estella said after a moment of consideration, “Actually we took a pretty close fly past most of the rocks around here, didn’t we? I think this was the only one inhabited.”

“Yeah, this was it, if others had life, the company would of set up a base there to be closer to this one. The rest didn’t even have air, so they should be safe to blow to pieces, you’ll need to make a hole anyway if we want to fly out of here, this isn’t exactly an econo car.” Aurora flashed me with a grin. 

“Tell me about it, now I know how a hippopotamus with a gland problem feels.” Estella continued. 

Aurora giggled, looking over at the plants. “Um, hello? Can you understand me?” She asked  them. 

That produced a shock among the plants. One of them wandered over to the device. “Hello, animals,” the translator said. 

“Well, kiddo, you heard them.” I set the asteroid as the target and fired the asteroid’s cannon at it while Guppy clapped her hands. 

“Hello plant, we uh, come in peace, I’m sorry about any damages we caused getting here, and any plants we uh, injured, we were operating under the wrong pretenses.”

A clear pause. “You did not damage us, sentient animals. Only our enemies, who have kept us trapped here for too long-“

One shot of streaming red goo plasma and the asteroid broke apart into rubble. 

“-Your arrival is fortuitous. We only recently regained operations here.”

“Oh well then, we’re glad we could help.” Aurora gestured to the red bumps. “Is that a good thing, or a bad one?”

“Whop bam boom, that made an impression.” Estella said as she took us towards the gap.

“We have not ingested the nutritious goo in some time. It is tingly.”

“We got a whole vat of it on our ship, and know where there’s a bunch on the top of the asteroid.” Aurora told them. 

“We have not been on the surface for fear of our enemies.”

“Tell us more about these enemies.” I asked the plants. 

“We were once numerous. We lived among the stars for thousands of years. Until a civil war broke out that cost the lives of many. Whole worlds were scorched to ruin. And now all that remains is us. We fled in this ship, went into hibernation. But some of our remaining enemies managed to sneak onboard. They went into hibernation also, but woke first. Some of them left, we do not know where they went. We managed to wrest control of the asteroid from them briefly and hide ourselves again before being driven back again. To keep them from messaging their compatriots, we sabotaged our own vessel and waited. Worried that they would find us and conquer us. But you rescued our friend, who was separated from us and survived in fear of discovery. He who is on your ship with his animal pet you call Hue.”

Aurora Lieos chuckled.  “Hue seems to like being his er, companion so it works out.”

I laughed nervously. Hearing H squared referred to as a pet was unsettling but I had a more pressing question occupying my mind. “So these enemies, are they also plants? What are they if not?”

“They are the ones you encountered on the surface. The aggressive ones who attacked you. Also their agents who you have been fighting against also. This Star Analytics.”

I looked across at Estella. “Plant war it was. Hmmm… that’s news to us.”

“They have been breeding monstrous animal/plant hybrids in an attempt to win against us.”

“Fascinating, I’m glad we could help.” Estella smiled happily, presumably at her theory proven correct. “Oh uh, I should probably let you guys have your ship back huh? You can probably fly it better than I can.”

“Please, continue. You know the modern universe better than us. We look forward to working with you and learning more about how things have changed.”

“So how much of this asteroid is ship, and how much is just rock?” Estella asked. 

“It was all artificial. Your ship was made from parts from one of our lost colonies. You will find much familiar in the machinery here.”

“A small world, isn’t it?” I whistled.

“Yes indeed!” Aurora leaned back and glanced at the view screen thoughtfully. “You know, with them helping us we can go pretty much anywhere on the frontier, help find their old worlds and take them back, do a lot of good for the needy on the rim.”

“It is not surprising. Agents of our enemies were seeding the world you came from with spoors and they were naturally drawn to your ship.”

THE END

It’s all in the frame…

This is based on a blog piece titled It’s all in the frame by Laurie Wagner. I think she said it was a line of dialogue one of her friends said. I’ve actually taken this line quite literally in the piece below where I’ve basically described all the framed photos that are sitting in the alcove of a cabinet or else framed up on the wall in my house. 

It’s all in the frame: the photo Mum and me took in Universal Studios in Japan, in the Jaws. We still had big smiles on our faces and my best friend commented on this. “Eaten by a shark and still so happy!” she had said or rather typed. We were on Messenger. Also in the frame is the two of us at my Honours graduation ceremony. This one was hung up on the wall of the sitting room behind the couch that nobody at home really sat on though Mum sometimes lay herself down on it for an afternoon nap or because she was unwell. Anyway, this was hung between my two certificates of completion for my double degree, one for each. We had actually since taken another photo of us for another of my graduation ceremony, for my Masters degree. But we never replaced the photo. I had gained weight in between the two photos and didn’t look as good even though I finally got to wear a hat the second time. It was a round hat and not the square ones I was used to seeing in Hong Kong TV dramas. But I did get a hat, unlike in the photo behind the couch. No hat but I was smiling good in there. In the frame, also, a photo Mum and me took in Shanghai a few years ago, couldn’t be more than 4 or 5, but I couldn’t say which year now. The second time we went back was all that was in the frame for me. 

Remarkable Woman in Ancient China (19)- Madame Xian

Who is she:

  • One of the renowned female military strategists 

Notable Life Events:

  • Born in 522 AD, as daughter of a chieftain of the Li people (an ethnic minority) in Southern China during the era of the Northern and Southern Dynasties. Her real name was either Xian Zhen or Xian Ying. 
  • Married the son of the provincial governor, Feng Bao, at the age of 13 and helped him settle many of the disputes between the Han Chinese and her people 
  • Flocked under the banner of the Chen dynasty (which governed Southern China) and gained a military position for herself
  • Became known as the Holy Mother by her people when the founder of the Sui Dynasty ended the Chen Dynasty and it was only after she yielded that the surrounding region near her yielded 
  • Gained position under the Sui Dynasty again when she quelled a local rebellion by directing her grandsons. At first, the one grandson she sent did not do as she said because of personal relationships and she decisively jailed that grandson and sent another one in his place 

Why is she remarkable:

  • I encountered mentions of three or four female military strategists in one ancient novel. After research, Madame Xian is simply the one with the greatest/most interesting details. 

Moonlake’s thoughts on her: 

  • I’m mostly getting a feel for her public persona which is quite decisive, having good political acumen but also quite loyal. 

English Reference:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lady_Xian

It was time to say goodbye…

This is a line invented by Laurie in response to the poem I Save My Love by Marjorie Saiser. 

It was time to say goodbye. I have not said much goodbye that sticks in the mind. Then again I tend to be forgetful. Out of sight, out of mind, as my best friend once said about me. 

It was time to say goodbye. I can’t remember much of when I left Hong Kong now. I mean, I’m not one for hoarding details like that. We flew from the old airport, that much I knew. It’s become  a flea market now that they’ve built a new airport. 

It was time to say goodbye. We didn’t really say goodbye to high school. We just moved on. I mean, we had the City Circle tram ride as our special outing and we went to a Town Hall for our speech night/graduation ceremony. But we never thought to say goodbye to high school because after high school was uni. 

It was time to say goodbye. We had an agreement to never lose touch, me and a few of our Honours classmates. But of course we did. I kept track of one through her knitting blog for a while (she happened to be my best friend among our Honours class) but then I ditched my Yahoo blog so that was that. 

It was time to say goodbye. I’ve been watching this drama where the protagonist had been sentenced for life for nothing except an excuse to milk him for money. And then someone from the same jail pardoned decided to come back to the jail. 

It was time to say goodbye. Goodbye to who I was and how I was. There was this Mandarin song called Onion and I sometimes think a human being is like an onion, you have layers and layers within yourself that you can keep peeling back. 

It was time to say goodbye. Those who left me cannot stay, it was part of a Chinese poem, I’ve forgotten the next line, I used to know it. 

Adventures aboard the Chen Xing- Chapter 28

Estella’s voice came over the intercom. “Seems Hue’s upgrades have given us a massive speed boost, we’ll be there in a matter of hours, compared to the couple days our previous trip took.”

“Impressive, let’s hope the upgrades don’t cause additional wear on ship components, getting spare parts this far out won’t be easy, aside from what I can piece together.” Aurora replied. 

“Not sure where our plant buddy got his engineering degree, but him and Hue have taken things down here beyond my level of capability,” Aurora admitted after several minutes of digging through the wiring. “It seems reliable, and better than anything we could hope to produce, but doing actual repairs or even maintenance is outside my capacity for now.”

“So long as she’s still operational when we need to make a hasty exit from that rock I’m fine with it,” Estella said, “Maybe ask Sam to point them towards upgrading the weapons next? I wouldn’t mind some additional firepower if Star Analytics sends a fleet of warships to track us down out of spite.”

“Sam, if you could be so kind? I’m going to try and get to work understanding this new engine, in the event I have to do some emergency repairs mid battle sometime down the road.”

“Sure, I will let them know.” And they had just re-emerged. “H squared, can you and Vines work on upgrading weapons next? And focus on the powers.”

A few small vines moved to face me, fluttering slightly. H squared’s face emerged as some other vines pulled aside. “Weapons mumble…?” He gave a distracted nod and then his face receded into the vines. A single vine reached out from the mass and put a small canister in my hand. It was oddly shaped, roughly cylindrical but with a flat side that came with a small silver rectangle. I could not work out what I was supposed to do with it. 

“This is?” I wasn’t sure whether Vines would understand me but hoping for the best.

One of the other vines pointed at my gun. 

“Hmm…” I tried to the fit this odd-shaped object to the gun. The flat side stuck to it like a magnet. 

“Is this it?” I asked Vines.

There was some rustling of the vines before they turned back to what they were doing. I took that for a yes. I went for a nap so that I could be sharpest upon landing. 

***

“Lets collect the plant samples first, once we land and Aurora does her magic, this place will be a rapidly expanding cloud of dust.” Estella said, she landed right near the red goo for collection.

“You mean I can go play in the goo again?” You could all guess who that was by now. 

Aurora nodded, “Yes, but take this bucket with you, it’s got a sealing lid, collect as much of the uh, chunky bits, into it please?” She told her.

“Absolutely.”

Estella lowered the ramp, “Have fun but don’t take too long.” She went off like a comet. 

She took a little longer than necessary and was covered in goo by the time she got back. 

“Have fun?” Aurora asked with a grin.

“Umm.. no? I was just being serious the whooole time.” Goo dripped down her hair and onto her cheek. 

Aurora chuckled, “Go wash up, we’ll be setting down to blow this place to scrap in a bit.” She reminded her.

“Sure thing, Aurora” her voice came back as she rushed off. 

Estella took us back to the spot of that pillar-elevator. 

“Hue, you and Vines make sure we’re ready to leave in a real super hurry, once we finish down below things are going… to get chaotic.” Aurora put on a reassuring smile. “Safe to say when we get back on board we’re going to be in kind of a hurry.”

“Here we go, no turning back now.” Estella gave us all a nod, adjusting her shotgun and clicking on the light harness Aurora provided for her.

“Stick together, and if you somehow get separated from the group make your way back to the ship, the rest will continue as planned and return here after.” Aurora said. 

I nodded. 

Vines shambled over to Aurora and handed a cylinder similar to mine but larger. 

Aurora turned over in her hands to look at it “Thanks,” She glanced at my rifle and put hers on a similar location. “Let’s hope we don’t run into the hungry fungus giant living down here.”It didn’t fit. Aurora looked at it some more. “Is this a grenade?” She asked Vines. Vines just shambled away. 

Aurora tried to load it into her rifle like a magazine. It didn’t fit either. “Whatever this is I’m sure I’ll find a use for it eventually.” She tucked it in a pocket of her armor and fastened it shut.

“Maybe it’s a security card for the facility?” Estella shrugged. “Or the self destruct key?”

“I’ll figure it out later, for now let’s get a move on.” Aurora hopped into the sled, adjusting her seatbelt and giving a nod to Estella.

Estella turned on the sled’s lights and looked over at everyone else. “Ready?”

Guppy looked disappointed as she climbed into the passenger seat. 

“I need you to pay careful attention to the route I’m taking, if something happens you’ll be the one driving everyone back out of here.” Estella told Guppy as she drove out into the black.

“You sure you’re up for this Jess?” Aurora asked Jessica with mild concern.

“I wish there was a way to keep all this alive and not just get a few samples. But otherwise, I’m good”

“Well, if we can find the on switch, and this place has engines, we could in theory fly it like a giant ship out of the system, somewhere on the fringe where no one will ever find it.” Aurora offered thoughtfully.

“But then Scorsby might be able to track me down.” She frowned. 

“That’s a little out of my size class,” I knew she would be grinning at the notion, “But hell, flying an asteroid.” She looked back over her shoulder. “If this rock has engines it’s got guns too I’ll bet, we can just vaporize another space rock near this one with them, he won’t know the difference once it’s space dust.”

Jessica’s eyes lit up with hope. Aurora took her hand, squeezing it softly. “Whatever happens, we’ll make sure Scorsby’s off your tail, one way or another, I promise.” Jessica smiled shyly. “Thank you so much.”

“Plus, the Old Boy isn’t going to track us all the way into space. He’s too tied up the way he is.”

“I hope you are right.”

“Sam’s right, he’s pretty busy with stuff down there, and once the corp realizes their new bio-weapon is a bunch of debris they’ll go back where they came from and let life return to normal in this sector.” Estella reassured her. 

“I’ve had the most hope in a really long time since I met all of you.”

“We’re glad to have you part of the crew.” Aurora gave her another smile.

“Well, what say we go explore this place?” She smiled broadly

“You are starting to acquire the right attitude for our crew.” I told her. 

“You said it Sam!” Estella gunned the engine and we drove out. The sound of the sled seemed muted in the large space. Hulking and crumbling delelicts laid everywhere. 

Estella picked a course between them roughly down the center line, “You do realize I have no idea where I’m going right?”

“This is a hangar for ships, so it should have a place for passengers to debark, enter the place properly, just keep going, there should be markings on the floor or walls to point visitors in the right direction.” Aurora said. 

“Hey! Aurora, look over there!” Guppy suddenly pointed off to one side. A ship was there outlined in dim greenish-yellow lights.  

“Interesting, think there might be survivors?” Aurora said as she shined her light in that direction. 

“Ooh, that could be fun.”

“Maybe?” Estella shrugged, slowing down and steering in that direction. “We should check it out at any rate, if they’ve lived down here this long they might be able to point us in the right direction.”

“They would also probably appreciate rescue, but for now, no one mentions we have a ship docked, as far as they know our ship dropped us off and is waiting in orbit for our signal.”

“Why make them think our ship is waiting in orbit?” Estella asked Aurora, as she slowed down on our approach.

“Because if they’re desperate for rescue they may well storm the ship in our absence and fly off, leaving us stranded, or at the very least hurt Hue and cause enough damage to keep us from leaving in time not to be blown up along with everything else.” Aurora explained, “If they’ve been trapped down here any length of time they may not be entirely rational.”

“Yeah, that’s a good point, let’s hope they’re friendly.”

“If they are not, then this is their welcome.” I patted my gun. Aurora nodded  in approval.

We had a saying in Chinese: it kills the horse going to the mountain you can see. That’s what felt like as we drove towards the craft. The curve of the floor dropped away bit by bit to reveal something that seemed way too huge to have been brought underground. 

“Okay, maybe this is the control center.” Estella concluded. 

“Maybe?” Aurora shrugged. “Could be survivors built it from a bunch of different wrecks too, it could be an entire underground community, in which case we’ll have to reevaluate our plans for blowing it all to scrap, at least until we evacuate everyone.”

The structure was in general disrepair- a lot of exposed areas with only a skeleton of a structure around it. Vines were everywhere, wrapped and looped about, as well as small greenish-yellow lights, like dim LEDs. 

“This gave me the feeling that perhaps we should have brought Vines, umm, that is if we could separate it from H squared.”

“The vines seem different, watch yourselves near them, they may be some kind of security system,” Estella warned us, shining her light across the building. “We can make our entrance just about anywhere I think.”:

“One’s as good as another, let’s pick one with the fewest vines.” Aurora nodded to me, “We could go back to get Vines if you want?” 

“Separating it from H squared might be a problem. We don’t want to drag H squared along with us.”

“Very true, and Hue might not want to have his new buddy leaving with us.”

“For now let’s see if there’s anyone still alive inside?” Estella suggested, “Whoever lived here might of perished long ago.”

“The lights are still working so either they’re consummate engineers, or someone’s still breathing.” Aurora pointed out, exiting the sled and readying her rifle. 

“I wonder if all this ties in with the giant I found last time.”

“Maybe this is its lair?” Estella unslinged her shotgun. “Up to you how we proceed, Sam, security is your area.”

Aurora nodded, “We’ll follow your lead.”

“Guess we go in and find out.” and I walked into the closest opening.

There were vines draping all the way down to about head height. They vibrated slightly as I walked under them and seemed to hover close to me. I dodged them and they didn’t seem to react to that. 

Somehow the inside was dark, none of the lights outside penetrated in. The floor felt spongy underfoot. I shone a light on it. Apparently it was made of a mat of brown vines. 

Aurora  had switched on the light on her rifle, was playing it around the floor and ceilings. “Looks like the same kind of place we found Vines, structure wise.” She mused.

“Yeah, maybe the entire structure is plant based?” Estella mused thoughtfully, from the back. She liked to bring up the rear.

I kept walking inside until I was hit by the stench of rotting meat. I covered my nose. 

“Ugh! Either we’re in a graveyard, or a creature’s lair, either way, I doubt anyone’s still alive if the place smells like this.” Aurora said. 

“Possibly,” Estella gestured to the plants, “Some plants give off the odor of rotting meat to attract prey, this might be something similar, at the very least there might be notes left behind by whoever died that might shed some light on this place and help us find the control center.”

“Yeah, even a partial map would be helpful,” Aurora looked back at Guppy and Jessica, “if either of you want to wait back in the sled that’s fine, you might not want to smell, or see whatever we find further in.”

Jessica raised her hand timidly. 

Estella chuckled, “We’re not in school, you can just speak.”

Jessica smiled and lowered her hand. “Nevermind, I should keep going. Just a little spooky here, you know”

“It might not be a bad idea to have someone stay with the sled, just in case,” Aurora looked over at Guppy, “Want to hang with Jess back there and make sure nothing tries to run off with the batteries?”

“Hmmm.. wasn’t the original plan to stick together? We don’t want something coming out and running off with Jess and Guppy and then we have to play rescue again?” I reminded them. 

Guppy looked a little hurt. “You’re trying to keep me away from the scary stuff.”

Aurora sighed. “Okay, good point, let’s press on then.”

Guppy perked right up. “Thanks, Sam.” I shrugged. Only making a practical point. 

“That’s because she cares,” Estella told Guppy quietly. 

“I just don’t want you having nightmares, or throwing up and then complaining you’re hungry the entire trip.” Aurora told Guppy with a joking grin.

“Ha! Never! I’m tougher than that. Give me a good mean ‘ol plant ta gut and you’ll see how strong my stomach is.”

“Keep talking like that and you’ll be captain one day,” Aurora said with a grin. I had no idea how she did this: the seamless transition between mother and best buddy. 

Guppy’s grin got wider. 

“I know I should be the objective scientific type here, but I have to admit this is all overwhelming. It’s like nothing I’ve ever seen before.” Jessica gaped at everything as she shone her flashlight around. 

“This is something few humans ever have I’ll bet.” Aurora echoed the sentiment. 

Panels and parts held together by vines cluttered and crowded the space. The lights only penetrated a few yards at a time. 

“This looks sorta like what Hue is turning the engine room into.” Estella commented. 

“So long as it doesn’t bleed into our living spaces and makes the ship fly better I’m not complaining.” Aurora said. 

“Or what that other bunch of vines was trying to do to the Xing.” I said. 

“Let’s not take too long in here, this place looks overrun, I’m beginning to doubt there’s anything to find that’s not covered in vines.” Estella urged. 

Several vines reached in from the outside and tried to grab Jessica who was the closest but she jumped and managed to elude them. 

“Estella!” I shouted out a warning upon seeing this. Estella reacted by steadying Jessica as she leaped back. Aurora raised her rifle, “I think that’s our queue to exit.”

“Probably not a bad idea before we get entombed.” Estella agreed, “Sam?”

“Yeah, let’s go.” Now Estella became the lead. Two of the plant creatures shambled in at that moment, blocking the exit and looking like they were going to attack again. 

“I think they’re not happy with our departure.” Estella gestured towards them.

“We could push deeper, try to find another way out? Fighting in these close quarters will get messy in a real hurry.” Aurora suggested and then looked over at me, “Your call.”

I quickly surveyed the structure. “This clutter is too difficult to move around in. Might be easier just fighting the vegetables again.”

“Right,” Estella raises her shotgun, “We go free, or you become coleslaw.” She told the plant matter of factly.

“I doubt they understand, or care.” Aurora told her with a mildly amused look, turning on her light harness and unsheathing her machete.

The plants advanced. I shot, followed by the other two gals. My shot ripped a huge chunk out of one plant. An odd green glow appeared where the wound was and some narrow viney filaments grew out of the wound to bind the thing, immobilising it. The other plant somehow evaded the attempts by Aurora and Estella and turned on me. 

My reflexes saved me. I sidestepped the attack. 

Aurora in front of me adjusted her aim and swung again in a chopping movement to delimb the vine monster. It threw the thing off balance. Another shot also went off in front- Estella’s work.  I let loose again and tore a large chunk out of the one Aurora swung at. The same thing happened as the last one- green glow, filaments appeared to immobilise the thing. 

“Let’s go.” I told the others and rushed out of the structure.

“Looks like your new gun improvement is pretty useful!” Estella said as I rushed past her. 

Outside, there was a whole mass of the plants, smack in between our path to the sled. 

Estella was the first to run for the sled, “Jump in, we’ll try to outrun them!”

Guppy flinged herself into the driver’s seat and gunned the engine- that girl could be as slippery and fast as it fitted her, kudos to her. Aurora, Estella and the plants were almost on a collision course. Me and Jessica lagged behind. Old injury. 

Somehow Estella had come back alongside us, “Give our girl a chance to turn the sled around and she’ll be back.”

Aurora stood waiting for us all to catch up, “Glad we took the time teaching her how to drive!”

The plants closed in, vines sweeping back and forth aggressively. 

Aurora brandished her machete, “Let’s hold the line until she saves the day.” Estella raised her shotgun and fired into the crowd of plants, “Not as if we got much choice!” She yelled above the gunfire.

Vines swung out at each of us successively. Aurora went off balance, Estella was hit while I dodged the attack. 

“Wheeee!” Guppy came flying back, slamming into the mass of plants. Vines and green goo shot out everywhere. “Get in everyone,” she yelled through her huge grin. “You see that Aurora?” she cackled madly

Aurora cheered her as she leaped in. “You are amazing!”

“Now that’s what I call a rescue!” Estella hopped onto the passenger seat, “Nice save!”

Aurora Lieos held out a hand for Jessica to help pull her inside. Jessica blushed but took the help. “My, this is way more excitement than I’m used to. I hope I can get used to this!”I leaped into the sled after them. “Good work, kiddo! And now let’s be off!”

Guppy slammed on the gas. Green goo was everywhere. The sled spins away from the mass of angry plants. “Where to now?”

Aurora pointed into the blackness, “Thata way?” she smiled at Jessica, “You’re going fine so far!”

“Hang a left and back on our original course,” Estella advised, “but ease down on the throttle, we could run out of space down here in a real hurry, and smashing up on a ship or the wall will end our trip real quick,”

Guppy’s grin faded down a notch. “Oh, you’re right.” With a sigh, she eased up. 

Jessica looked around. “Do you think this area takes up the whole subsurface of the asteroid? It just seems so endlessly huge.”

“Hmm, possibly, If I had time I could rig up an echo location device to map the cavern, or a flare gun to light things up.” Aurora replied.

“Hey, now there’s an idea!” Estella opened the passenger side storage box, “There might be a signal flare pistol in the survival kit we could use.” Estella pulled one out with a smile. “Here we go!”

“Guppy, change course to the right, and give it a couple minutes before you set it off,” Aurora advised, “then backtrack to our original course, that way anything that sees the flare go off won’t be able to easily track us.”

“Good thinking,” Estella lowered the flare gun, “We don’t want the plant army on our trail that easily.”

“Advantage to a hover sled is there’s no tracks for them to follow at least.” Aurora said. 

“None for us too, either, if we get lost.” Estella pointed out quietly. She discharged the flare when we got far enough according to Aurora. With its light, it was clear that the ceiling was high enough to accommodate large ships. No surprise really since we knew how large the underground area was. And we couldn’t see any walls. 

“This is potentially a problem.” Estella said, “There’s no way to know where the control center is.”

“Let’s head back to the ship, the elevator path that took it down here, it should have maintenance access hatches along it somewhere to replace worn out parts and what not, those access passages will probably lead deeper into the facility.” Aurora suggested. 

“Good thinking.” Estella nodded to Guppy to head back towards the ship.

“Umm, which way is that?”

“At the very least we know that thing is powered, we can follow those power cables back to the reactor, those cables have to be laid in some kind of access space.” Aurora said. 

Estella pointed behind us, “Two minutes back the way we came, then hang a left and keep going, you’ll see the glowing structure on our right a couple minutes after that, and then our ship a while after.”

“You paid attention to all the landmarks?” Aurora sounded mildly surprised. 

“I fly between stars, a lot of the time constellations and shapes are all I have to go by, this is similar, just with parked hulks of ships rather than starlights.” Estella replied confidently. 

“Right, astropath, the reason none of the rest of us can do it.” 

It took a while but we arrived safely back. “Okay, let’s update Hue about the plant army, in case they pay a visit, and then we’ll start poking around for the access hatches.” Aurora suggested. 

“An idea, what about building some kind of detector to locate the strongest power source?” Estella suggested, “Then we can follow that towards the reactor?”

Aurora  nodded thoughtfully. “I can build a M.A.D easily enough, hand held maybe.”

“A what?” Estella raised an eyebrow. “Also, Sam, maybe you could mount some kind of plasma machine gun on the back of the sled using a ship point defense weapon? We run into another army it’ll be real helpful.”

“Magnetic Anomaly Detector, it’ll find the magnetic differential powered wires give off, or the magnetic shielding a transformer or power plant has. It’ll help us locate the power lines running to the elevator at least, but its range will be kind of limited for handheld.”

“Right, I will grab one off one of the gunning stations.” I told Estella. 

“Need a hand?” Estella offered.

“Guppy, can you keep watch on the main cannons while we work? That plant army finds its way here, we’ll need someone ready to make’em into a stir fry.” Aurora asked. Guppy saluted and headed off. 

“Jess? I could use an extra pair of hands,” Aurora continued, “I can also build some motion detectors for us, just…” She gave a pained smile, “Don’t wander more than about fifty feet from me with one or it’ll fall apart kind of… Explosively.”

“Motion detectors that double as hand grenades, oh the possibilities!” Estella offered. 

“If you think that’s special you should see what happened after I remodeled my first apartment’s kitchen and then stepped outside to buy groceries.” Aurora said with a wink.

“This is why we give her extra time to finish her designs,” Estella told Guppy, “Her quick’n dirty builds tend to.. Malfunction once she stops paying attention to them.”

Guppy’s eyes got big. “I wanna see something blow up.”

Estella laughed, “Remember that sentence when we’re running for our lives minutes before this entire asteroid goes bang.”

Guppy giggled in response. 

“These will work,” Aurora told Jessica, “But stuff packed close together will just register as a single blip, so don’t count on one blip being just one creature.”

“The detector though should let us find magnetic fields at least, just the range is iffy, more powerful the field, longer the range, won’t be much good if the fields have flux variance though it’ll try to filter that out as background static.” She continued. 

I hauled a machine gun over to sled and mounted it onto the back according to Estella’s advice. Meanwhile, she welded some makeshift blades on the front of the sled. “This way we can mince the plants more effectively.” She said. 

Broadening Horizon Reads 2023

I actually read (or listened to) the two BHR books concurrently. But, to be honest, I think I need to get back into the pacing of audiobooks as I think I’m half tuning out as I listened to them. 

Leviathan Wakes by James S. A. Corey 

Technically, I might be able to learn something from this for my WIP but practically, that’s not the case. The alternating chapters in Holden and Miller’s point of view is for two parallel plot lines with events happening at the same time and that’s just not how my WIP is structured at the moment. And I’ve seen the alternating chapter structure before from other novels but I don’t see a reason to apply it to my WIP. 

Years of Rice and Salt by Kim Stanley Robinson 

Besides the hook of ‘to find out… turn to the next chapter’ in book 1 (and I doubt I can apply this to my own work), I’m not really connecting to this novel so… It reminds me of the Cloud Atlas in that it is a novel told via loosely connected short stories but I prefer the Cloud Atlas.