Moonlake’s Book Discoveries: September 2024

Fantasy 

Northern Lights by Phillip Pullman

I got curious because His Darkest Materials was the title for the lesson on research for the novel writing course that I did with the University of British Columbia up on the edX platform. As I was reading it, it reminds me a little of one movie that I was watching during my movie marathon stint. As it turned out, that was the Golden Compass, a film adaptation of this very book, I only found out when I was chatting to my good friend and current GM of our gaming group. 

This first book is okay, not really absorbing for me so I’m just limiting myself to one session per day. It does set up the series nicely though. 

The Moon Goddess’ Daughter by Sue Lynn Tan

This book has caught my interest because I’m always a bit fond of folklore retellings and this book does not disappoint in providing new twists to it. Other than that, it’s okay but nothing more about it really grabs me. Apparently it’s a duology but as yet, I’m not sure whether I will read book 2 or not. 

Outlander by Diana Gabaldon AND One Hundred years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marqez (audiobooks)

I already talked about them in Broadening Horizon reads so won’t repeat it here. At any rate, I did not finish either. 

Wit’ch Fire by James Clemen 

The book is okay. It gave me a throwback to epic fantasy with the formation of a party on a quest with a slight twist: many members have their own agenda. I am currently of two minds whether to pursue this series or not. As per usual, I will read the blurb of the second book and see. 

Wit’ch Storm by James Clemen 

This book introduces a bunch of new characters and maybe because my attention is not fully with it, I do feel like it affects comprehension (not to the extent that I cannot finish it but just sometimes I would get lost and have to exert effort to remember what happened to a bunch of characters earlier on in the book). But other than that, the book is fine. I do intend to go on with this series. 

Wit’ch War by James Clemen 

This is the last book held by my library out of this quintet and it finally reveals the key aspect on the underlying world/main conflict so that I can guess where the series is heading. I think I will stop here. 

About the book itself, it has a twist that I wasn’t expecting from book 2. Solid work from the author but overall not quite my cup of tea. I mean, it’s labeled epic fantasy and I don’t think I can dispute that but it’s just not the same type of epic fantasy that I’m fond of. 

Mystery

The Hairdresser’s son by Gerbrand Bakker

I didn’t feel like reading anything too engrossing so a mystery it is. So after reading blurbs, I picked this one up but it’s not quite my cup of tea. I guess I’m still more keen on a murder mystery rather than a generic mystery. The ending is open-ended but because I’m not on board with the story, it doesn’t leave me with anything. 

The Lost Choice: A Legend of Personal Discovery

As a mystery, it is average to be honest and I’m not sure that is the genre that my library put it under (then again, I don’t need to rehash that libraries don’t assign books to the right genres and nowadays I think publishers and authors also play with genres and subgenres as a marketing gimmick). But it does have a strong thematic statement that touches me. And it’s done well so that it entices thought rather than bashing you in over the head with it. So overall, I like it. 

Gifted Touch by Melinda Metz 

I was expecting more paranormal mystery with this book but it is more teen school drama. Having said this, it’s not bad but I’m just not convinced that I’m invested in this book enough to start reading of this series which I know from the Q&A with the author at the end of the book is already all planned out. 

Good morning, Killer by April Smith

I felt a little misled by the blurb and had to go back and read it again. My final verdict is that it does not intentionally mislead but isn’t what I expected it to be either. Basically, it diverges off the main case into the protagonist’s complicated love world half way and this might be in response to the new passion in character driven fiction but I personally am not buying it. Having said that, it does read okay, just not really my cup of tea.

Silent House by Blake Pierce

I did not want to start a long novel when I have to go on an overseas trip in October so mystery it is until the actual trip. 

Now this is more of my type of mystery book. The book focuses more on the plot but also develops the main character solidly. What is lacking is the twist part but I think that is getting harder and harder to pull off for an experienced mystery reader like myself (I’m still not the most astute but just from the sheer amount of mystery reading I’ve done I have to admit part of the attraction of this genre is wearing off for me). Overall, a solid read for me. 

Sleeping with Fear by Kay Hooper

The premise of an investigator with memory loss is not that fresh nowadays but the author does milk it for all it’s worth in terms of tension and stakes. I didn’t guess the twist (culprit). Overall, I like it. 

Historical Fiction

The Empty Throne by Bernard Cromwell 

The prologue nicely plays (and continues) on the end of the last book and gives it a bit of freshness. The book itself is okay but since I’m going on trip soon this is another nice stopping point for me. Not sure if I will continue with book 9 or not, I guess it depends on my whims. 

I wonder why people never…

The jump-off line is actually invented by Laurie Wagner, inspired by An Ordinary Day by Jean Reinhold. 

I wonder why people never expect things to go wrong until they do? Inborn optimism or protagonist syndrome? 

I wonder why people never talk about the failures or think about them even if they are talked about? Why such an obsession about success? What values is success without failure? 

I wonder why people never have the same standards over the most basic things? It’s individuality, I guess, but also frustrating. How low can some people stoop to? 

I wonder why people never… I don’t wonder actually. Not about that. I wonder about constellations and how I can create new ones to fit different societies. 

I wonder about the first names being given to things and the inconsistencies between languages and cultures. I wonder about speculative biology even though I never did biology. I wonder where I am going with my current novel. I wonder if life is always a repeated pattern or I’m just too astute? 

23 days Italy, Switzerland and France trip on trains- Italy part 3

Day 6, we traveled by train from Florence to Venice. In general, I found Santa Maria Novella much more pleasant compared to Rome Termini. The platform numbers came out about half an hour rather than 20 minutes on the dot and obviously it was smaller so less mad dashing across platforms. Also, by this time, I had learnt a couple tricks including just boarding the train at the closest door and then walking to my cabin on the train and in general just going through the entrance gate ASAP. I picked a hotel very close to the arrival wharf from the line N San Marco ferry outside Santa Lucia train station but we still got lost a bit because we were reluctant to go through what in our eyes was an alleyway (but considered a normal street in Venetian eyes). 

The intention was to visit Burano and walk to the Fondament Nove ferry wharf which, according to Google maps, was only 15 minutes away from our hotel. So at first, I was confident that we could make it by always going left and in the direction away from our hotel. But after several turns, I admitted that we were lost and we gave up and backtracked to our hotel. We had a pizza lunch nearby- we ordered a Daviola pizza. It was not as spicy as Mum liked it- quite mild tasting, but not bad. It did leave us very thirsty afterwards, though. After lunch, we spent the time taking pictures of the Doge Palace and Basilica San Marco (they were supposed to be included in the day tour I reserved through Viator tomorrow, the only day trip I booked this time around but we had a whole afternoon to kill and they were very close to our hotel). 

We had dinner at Ristorante Principessa, the restaurant that was part of a 4-star hotel just around the corner from our hotel. We had an assorted seafood plate (assorted prawns including what I assumed was the Norwegian lobster with the flat body, small spicy octopi, squid meat dyed by squid ink and fishmeat on bread) and seafood spaghetti (I originally wanted to order the prawn and crab meat gnocchi but the waiter must have incorrectly deduced where my finger pointed). Both were excellent and the best meal we had at Italy so far. 

The second day at Venice was spent with a walking tour that brought us across 5 or all 6 neighbourhoods of Venice and included the gondola ride (as I’m sure I’ve said before, I mainly joined the tour to avoid the hassle of needing to haggle with gondoliers over prices) as well tickets into the Basilica San Marco and the Doge Palace. We had the afternoon free after the tour and I was going to talk Mum into taking the line 1 ferry to visit more attractions but Mum was too tired from all the walking we did from the day tour. So back to hotel for rest and then onto dinner at 1000 Gourmet Venezia. We originally had our eyes on the Boscaiola 2.0 pizza which had grounded black pork meat and black truffle cream but apparently by the time we got to Italy black truffles were out of season. The waitress suggested the Burrata pizza when we asked her so we ordered that. The crust was the high and soft variety which was not what we were used to but the burrata cheese added to the pizza was something new for us. It tasted good and we were very happy that we chose to visit this pizzeria. Overall, we had the best food at Venice out of our 3 chosen Italian bases. And that almost concluded our Italian trip (well, not quite, a little bit carried over to day 8 when we had to travel by plane from Venice to Zurich. But that goes into the Switzerland leg of the trip so tune in for that next month).

Chinese Lore- a selection of mythical fauna (22)

Pi

Physical Description:

An deer-like creature with its anus growing on its tail.


Tong Tong

Physical Description:

An pig-like creature.

Special Properties:

The sound it makes is like its name. Pearls grow inside its body.


Xiu Fish

Physical Description:

Looks like the Crucian carp with a big head.

Special Properties:

Its meat is a cure for warts.


Xiu Piu

Physical Description:

A frog-like fish with a white mouth.

Special Properties:

Its call sounds like that of eagles. Its meat is a cure for a diseases that produces white spots on the skin.

Tips on Dealing with Low Energy: Moonlake’s Insights

For those who have followed me for a while, yes, I’m still on the low energy phase with the WIP. And as the title indicates, this is a post where I will talk about my strategies for carrying on. 

But before I delve into my own specifics, I think the most useful thing for managing this (or procrastination which is not quite the same thing) that I had ever come across personally was what one of the UBC novel writing courses instructor Annabel said, “How you deal with this is either be kind or be strict to yourself.” That might not be everyone’s cup of tea but I’m a practical person and that’s exactly how I see it in a broad sense. 

Moving onto my specifics, I had two issues: the first was that I tend to have the most clear idea of the scenes at the start of the book compared to later sections. I might have talked about this before but the difference is as big as I can convert a certain number of scenes straight from outline into scenes by just expressing my outline as prose in one swoop whereas it feels like there is an entire black hole between the outline and the write up of the scene. And basically I’ve moved on from the easy scenes, all the scenes that I have yet to write for the WIP are black holes. The second is monetary or security inspired and driven by the recurring argument that Mum and I have over the large block of my time not used towards making money (my main job is a casual research assistant, I used to be working at least part time but then in light of current economic conditions post-COVID, my job has become almost on-demand now). For at least 3 or 4 years now, I have been resisting the idea of looking for another career to supplement my income (I was warned against competition ambitions in the course of novel writing during the online novel writing course and I have been eyeing another income supplement warily ever since). But I’m starting to think about getting educated to become a certified translator/interpreter. My initial idea was to become an editor but then I’m not sure how much job I would get as a native Chinese speaking freelance editor and I’m definitely trying to breach into this second source of income as a freelancer (I like my boss and she likes me and I know she’s trying really hard to keep me as her RA and plus I tend to like the job okay). 

Now I actually have written a prior post on some of the mechanic or structural ways to break into a scene. But I think the predominant approach I have been using is to just keep on going without measuring myself if I need to. And I have definitely fallen back in pace, from 200 or 300 words per day 6 days a week to basically 100 words per day 5 times a week. What I tell myself is that it’s not the speed that is important but the quality. So it doesn’t matter in the long haul. 

Lately, one approach I’ve been using with scene writing specifically is to take it to the point of creative exhaustion. What do I mean by that? Well, it’s basically the point where I’m just done with the scene and can’t work on it anymore or where the thought “You’ve been mired in this scene for x days now, how about moving on?” just arises by itself. 

That’s it for today. Let me know if you want to discuss specific parts of this post further.

23 days Italy, Switzerland and France trip on trains- Italy part 2

Day 3, we made our way to Termini from Ottaviano for our journey to Florence and gosh it was dangerous to go on escalators with two checked in luggages plus one hand carry (we did not know that we had to have the luggage besides us on the same step, we were both putting the big luggages in front of us so it was always falling down in front of us at the threshold between escalator and landing). Also, when Mum got off the metro at Termini, the big luggage tripped her up or something so she ended up with a full leg stuck in the gap between the metro train and the platform. Luckily, the male passenger who got off before her saw that and pulled her straight up else she would have a forceful amputation of the leg! Thank you so much for the fast reaction and also thanks goes to the kind man who carried down the big luggages for us at  one escalator/set of stairs at Termini. After that misadventure, I had a croissant for breakfast and Mum had nothing. As per usual, we arrived early and which platform our train arrived at appeared on the dot on the big departure screen 20 minutes earlier. I thought all the gates to platforms would open so moved leisurely down to the corresponding gate. Except that it never opened and our train had already left by the time I realised that. At the Italo ticket booth, I was forced to upgrade from Smart to Prime Business and forked out 70 Euro for 2 tickets from Rome to Florence. And how I rushed to the second train, not wanting to fork out another 70 Euro for a third one! I literally rushed from cabin 11 to cabin 3 along the platform and the attempt to port one checked in luggage up 3 steps was also an absolute killer. I didn’t even know how I managed and how Mum managed but we did! But Rome is definitely on my blacklist purely because I never wanted to experience the hassle of train travel from Termini ever again! 

All the mishaps aside, we arrived safely at our Florence hotel at around 12pm and luckily, our room was already ready! We spent the rest of the day exploring Florence but only managed to find the Duomo, Baptistery of St. John and the Uffizi Gallery (we did walk past the cathedral near Santa Maria Novella but skipped it because it was just an old grey dilapidated building). To be honest, I followed a pointer to Ponte Vecchio but only managed to find the Uffizi Gallery. We had lunch at a place called Ristorante Bar at a square where Mum had tiramisu (which turned out to be in liquid form rather than cake form as we expected) and ice-cream (she did not feel like eating) and I forgot what I had, some light food. Then we had gelato at Vecchio Cioccolato e Gelato and there was a French young couple who lined up behind us who very kindly pointed us back towards the Duomo because we were thoroughly lost by then! In fact, the guy actually confirmed the route in Google maps by walking around himself. I think we were still muddled with the instructions after a while (we always do, after a while, it’s always did the person say left or right?) but we miraculously made it back. Dinner was at Pantarei Osteria Pizza & Grill which I had reserved. Mum had the squid ink noodles with shrimp and candied lemon peel which she was curious about and I probably had some salmon dish- fish was my go-to dish for Western cuisine. The noodles were okay but Mum said she was so-so about it too just like the carbonara. 

Day 4 was supposed to be split between Pisa and Siena. Not much to be said about the trip to Pisa where we basically took pictures of the Leaning Tower and the building next to it and then caught our 11:30am train back to Florence. And here, a small hitch-up occurred: we were dropped at Firenze Ri-something, the outlying train station of Florence rather than back at Santa Maria Novella. We had lunch at a taglia pizza place (the pizza was pre-cut into rectangles and did not taste great because it was stored inside the counter for god knows how long already) before we bought a ticket back to Santa Maria Novella. That put us back at Florence at around 2pm rather than 12pm. And then when we were trying to find the bus to Siena, we ended up giving up because the bus company’s website always has bus routes where redundant stops are added (with the correct bus lines added in brackets underneath?!). Long story short, we ended up riding along the tram for the whole afternoon looking for bus stops for two separate bus lines (I had the thought of going to Piazza Michelangelo on the line 13 bus instead of Siena). I had booked dinner at Siena but obviously I had to cancel so we rode the tram to Santa Maria Novella (it had become our second homebase in Florence besides our hotel) for greater choice of dinner options. We ended up choosing a Chinese restaurant (I could see Mum was already a bit sick and tired of Italian cuisine)- not sure what its Italian name was but in Chinese its name meant the Big Capital Restaurant. We ordered two dishes- crabs and prawns, but the bill only came up to about 50 Euro. In general, I was underhitting the budget for lunch and dinner in Italy compared to my New Zealand trip. In fact, this became the theme for this entire trip except for Switzerland. But more on this later. 

Day 5 was our big trip to Cinque Terre from Florence (it was 2.5 hours one way between Florence and La Spezia and then about half an hour between La Spezia and the last village of Cinque Terre, Monterosso al Mare). Now, Mum originally wanted to do it in reverse order, thinking that the majority of visitors would do the 5 fishing villages in chronological order, from the first one onwards. But I pointed out most of the hikers would start with the last village and visit them in reverse (something I found through Google search on Cinque Terre trips). So I came up with my own order which was 4, 5, then 1 and then maybe 3 if we had extra time. And doing it in that order (4,5,1) did help us to avoid the big crowds. To be honest, the fourth village was a bit too shabby for our taste and when seeing one of the pictures of a door taken there, Mum actually commented that we took a picture of a rubbish bin. Now, Monterosso al Mare, the biggest village, was a much different picture. It had a completely new look to it. We had a cheese and ham sandwich/focaccia (it was basically a sandwich with crunchy/deep fried bread) each for lunch. Then we hopped the train back to village 1 (Riomaggiore) where the road into the village was so steep that I was forced to find a different way back (we usually backtrack since I’m direction blind but am forced to be the guide due to language barriers) where the way down would not be as steep. After the 3 villages, we decided to call it a day in order to not miss our train from La Spezia back to Florence. And lucky we were not greedy because the train from village 1 back to La Spezia was delayed. For dinner I again reserved but we had no success finding the restaurant I booked because we were befuddled by a street where the numbers jumped around (at first it was going ever higher and then it jumped around to a small number!). So we went back to Santa Maria Novella and tried to find the Chinese restaurant where we had dinner yesterday. But what do you know that we could not even find the street with lots of restaurants and ended up having dinner at Burger King. And that concluded our 3 days in Florence. 

Broadening Horizon Reads 2024

Outlander by Diana Gabaldon (audiobook)

To be honest, this book doesn’t really grab my attention. I started tuning out after chapter 7 or 8 and I finally decided to abandon it after chapter 16. There is nothing really wrong with the author or the narrator per se but it is just not my cup of tea. The plot is essentially too romance-centric and lacking in the type of excitement that I need to sustain interest and the bit of Scottish meta is not absorbing enough for me to really enjoy. So no point for me to just breeze through without really paying attention to it. 

One Hundred years of Solitude by Gabriel Garcia Marqez (audiobook) 

Again, I did not finish this audiobook because the long Spanish names are getting too confusing and I am mostly tuning out of this story, being absorbed in online jigsaw puzzles that I do concurrently to listening (else I will literally fall asleep). I think when I chose this book it was marketed as magic realism but in practice this just read to me as if it’s a Spanish family historical saga (the magic realism was at the earlier chapters but did not actually feature largely in the story, at least not in 7 chapters) 

The Character based Approach to Story: Moonlake’s Take

The character based approach to story is basically the idea that the character is your story so all you have to do is basically really really inhabit your main character and you are done (if you are writing third person limited or first person. Arguably, it’s useful in omniscient too but there you have to inhabit the however many POVs that you switch between and a switch in POV is not a switch in camera angle [quote from one of my UBC instructors] but an entire lens to process the events in the story). A simple and powerful idea.

So what’s my take on this? Well, when I first came across this idea in full, it was through Robert McKee’s Story, specifically chapter 7 which he titled the Substance of Story and I bought the idea right off the bat. But in practice, it works quite differently for me. Firstly, I always conceptualise a story through events and each scene for me pivots around what happens rather than how a particular character experiences the events. Secondly, because I outline in omniscient (or at least a kind of birds’ eye view because it is really hard to say that I outline in a particular voice given that my outline is basically a jumble of notes to self and whatever I know about a particular scene) that means that I have to get into character for a third person limited narration that is my norm for writing. And I have to admit I am not quite adept at this and I can’t say that I am really in character for most of the scenes I have drafted. I am not sure that I can claim a particular scene that I am really ‘in character’ all the way through, snippets certainly but never a full scene. Instead, what I was able to import from McKee was his conceptualisation of beats as a coupled action/reaction between characters (I might have mentioned it before but I never really got what a beat was when I first learnt it through the UBC novel writing course until I read McKee) and his framework of how a story can be conceptualised as a continuous cycle of where the protagonist is trying to bridge the gap between his/her expectations from their actions and results as experienced by them. In fact, both frameworks are occasionally used by me to try to break into a particular scene (I wrote about that topic before).

So in light of all this, despite my initial enthusiasm for the idea, I have come to embrace the idea instead that there are different approaches into story and it is not necessary to always enter it through character in the first draft. The idea is that the story will eventually come to embrace character, plot and theme in its final form and of course I’m now still far from that point.

That’s it for today. Feel free to let me know your own take on this.

Chinese Lore- a selection of mythical fauna (21)

Xiang She (or Elephant Snake)

Physical Description:

A bird that looks like female pheasants except for multi-coloured feathers.

Special Properties:

The sound it makes is like its name. It is a uni-sex creature.


Xian Fu

Physical Description:

Looks like a Crucian carp except that it has a pig-like body.

Special Properties:

Consuming its meat is a cure for vomiting.


Huang Niao (or Yellow Bird)

Physical Description:

An owl-like bird with a white head.

Special Properties:

The sound it makes is like its name. Consuming its meat is a cure for jealousy.


Dong Dong

Physical Description:

An goat-like creature with only a single horn and a single eye grown behind its eyes.

Special Properties:

The sound it makes is like its name.